Maybe its not truly steampunk since it does have tanks and a few other things not often found there. As for the original devices, they were...
So does that explanation seem a lot better than the velcro like straps? Or do you prefer the straps? I know its my story but I value the opinion...
If all hooved creatures in the story's world were naturally able to use psychokinesis to levitate objects, would that be better? I could say they...
So does that mean that the brain implant and kinesis devices are a bad idea?
Thanks for your input, it really helps. Did you have a preference out of the ideas I listed above?
Hello everyone this is my first time posting on these forums. I'm a little nervous because my story isn't nearly finished and because it's...
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