I think the mission needs to be Myrtles. I'd make Red older than Myrtle but appearing to be in the same age range. That way though she's gone past...
Well I'll give ya a little validation if you like. I sorta liked the backstory even if it gave me a little heebie jeebie because its bodily...
Yeah Tula - she was a good turtle. She just had NO sense of direction. Now those shoe boxes. I dunno. I wrote in a fevered dream for 2 years....
It definitely brought a grin to my face to remember Tula the Turtle. I even called my mom to see if she still had it. And yep, apparently it's on...
If I read something to the end but don't really have anything constructive to say I don't "critique" it. Just posting an I don't like or That was...
My first story ever I still have. It's HORRIBLE but so me. I was eight and I wanted to be a writer just like all my favorite authors. I wrote...
I've never really thought that hard about how the characters appearances are. When I'm working on a story and I get a little stuck or distracted I...
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