Really, the dashes in the first sentence are fine in my opinion, but you need the commas and 'and' in the second, without them the reader is going...
originally elves came from old northern europe and were only about a foot or to tall, if that. They somtimes did chores at night if you left out a...
thanks for thread and answers. I have been on this since highschool myself. It never was quite explained, i was just told put this here. p.s....
ok, man. there's a very old movie made before the dracula movies called nasferatu. not sure if that is correct spelling, but has the vamp as more...
in fiction vmpires can do many things, some of the things that make them really scary are these abilities. How about their ability to turn to...
thank you all very much for the input. I really did used to be a stickler on seperating the two but yaeh things change. all of you have been a...
I've read in some places it's ok to put dialogue in with narration. I've also read the opposite. Example-Ronald looked at him and smiled....
She arrived at the airport, parked the bike and threw the keys to the baguage porter. "Keep it."
Separate names with a comma.