I have Shots on my pod, but never heard this one!nice lyrics.
no but I will
It's good, but it's not enticing enough. Not your story synopsis, but just the format of the
letter itself. You are following the standard for a...
Press Play -- Turn it up... slowly...
...am writing a script right now that is going to blow the lids off!
It's a horror script!
I had a character in one of my stories named Marlin, and for an obvious reason,
as that is a name that refers to a fish.. I eventually had to drop...
Don't even think about it. You keep on writing.
I really like it. Last sentence may be a little too long, but that's about it.
Also, omit 'and provoking' and just stick to 'flirtatious'
Separate names with a comma.