This has been really interesting. My input? Amber eyes look cool. This has been particularly good for me, as I was considering having a race with...
I'm not quite sure what you're asking. The animal metaphor just made it more confusing. I will answer what I guess the question was: When I don't...
Yeah, addressing the reader is hard. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't. Unless you are an incredibly popular author or it is a picture...
Thanks! I agree with you. (BTW, it's a language I made up, so there wouldn't be any native speakers)
I agree with you. Really, we're better than we used to be. Have you ever heard a traditional Japanese, Aboriginal, African, etc. story? Chances...
Hi everyone, Merry Chistmas! It is currently boxing day in Australia. Okay, I have a problem. In a novel that I'm writing, the POV character...
Okay, first things first. Sounds like a good story. However, I do not recommend writing something as a group, but it's your choice. Be sure to...
I have to agree with Severin. It's a good story, but slightly cliched. My ideas: Breaking locker, putting red paint on her chair(I hope you get...
Sounds like a great story! I like torturing characters, so this is what I would do: I agree with James, the horn of Africa is a good idea. I...
I think either would be fine. I personally would write 'He said he was pissed off.' As for readers who do not understand slang, I think that they...
Separate names with a comma.