One little thing you could do to make the point clearer is spelling the words in her dialogue the english way, i.e. colour with a u.
It's odd how whenever I think about something, there's always a thread on it here. I am about to start my second novel (just finished my first!!...
I have loads of ideas which it turns out are ripoffs of other things/have already been done. Hell, yesterday I was really excited about this idea...
It is possible to make a Hit man likeable. People have already mentioned 47 from Hitman, and to that I would like to add Bill Nighy's character...
To me it sounds a little cartoon supervillainish. That, and I tried reading it backwards because it seemed like it could be something backwards....
Sounds like vanity or shallowness rather than lust. To me, anyway.
That's ok. I probably should have worded it better in the first place given how many people told me off.
They return along the same route, and that's when things happen. I could always hold back descriptions until then, but to me it would seem odd...
They're necessary because the locations are important. As for subplots, I had a few at the start but right now my book is in danger of becoming...
I'd hope not. I have some chapters which are just travelling. I dislike writing them because nothing eventful happens but they're necessary.
Previously, on Writingforums: And now, the conclusion. I like them. The end of a chapter provides a good place for a person to put a book...
You want to know my views on cliffhangers? I'll tell you my views on cliffhangers... next time.
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