Thanks for merging the two threads - I completely forgot I gone done one of these before! I've been a member for more than 14 days have posted...
Not entirely new... but reborn! Also, an experiment! Hi! I'm not exactly new, but after a length period of barely posting and spending most of my...
'Huh??' to something being fantasy and non-fiction at the same time. It's not possible. They are contradictory.
Hi everyone! I've recently contributed to an anthology of children's stories which was put together in support of the charity Child's Play, who...
Well, that's all well and good, Edward. No harm, no foul. However, you most certainly did make a comment on the structure of the piece....
Because while dropping a single coin might make a kaching, dropping a large number of coins wouldn't. Nearly all onomatapoeia are difficult to...
As many have already said; JUST WRITE! I'm terribly critical of my own work and am only now getting to the point of fighting through the pain...
Mainly due to how it fits in with the rhythm, flow and beat of the opening passages of my story. Without wanting to post more of the story than I...
Thanks for your input, Ellipse & Holden. Ellipse, typically it would work better. Definitely. But in line with what Holden has said, I personally...
Whilst my initial effort was intended very much as a placeholder and is clumsy at best, that tone ("little darlings"? Pur-leeze) strikes me as a...
Just to clarify, I knew what the allusion was to. :) As people have said, subtlety is key.
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