So I wanted to pitch a few ideas on how to actually start the story without 'revealing' as much as I have already. That being in three ways... 1]...
Beat: "I feel as though I might lose my job as royal guard if that happens. That being said... I'm sure Treble would do whats right and find...
Treble: 'That's an interesting question. Seeing as I'm the king of Allegro City and all. Uhh... I have a feeling Beat would not be as......
Beat: 'No... gadget? Uhh...' Treble: 'Oh boy... here we go.' Beat: 'That's... a tough one. Without your hearing aid, wouldn't you...' Treble:...
Beat: 'Interesting. The various worlds you are all from have nicked my curiosity.' Treble: 'Our turn? Sweet! Go for it, Beat!' Beat: 'What is...
Beat: "That's an easy one. Humans." Treble: "Uhh, d- does that even count?" Beat: "We're all creatures in the eyes of Gaia. And humans are...
Treble: "Humans have some interesting games. Alright. Beat will be first." Beat: "Guess that makes Treble second. Very well. Let us proceed then. "
Beat: "That does beg the question, Treble. How well do you know me?" Treble: "I'd be a pretty lousy friend if I didn't know you." Beat:...
Treble: "Three questions between us. Sounds fair." Beat: "Very well. I'll humor this." Treble: "Aww, your the best~"
Beat: "What an interesting greeting." Treble: "I like this guy. I'm sensing... A carefree Rhythm? Anyway, we Lutra are err... 'managing'. Being a...
Treble: "Umi! Yuki! Fuu! Haruka! A pleasure to meet you all! I'm Treble." Beat: "King Treble." Treble: "Beat! But, uhh... Yeah. The Music King,...
Beat: "Sir, we don't have time to deal with pointless human games. We have better things to-" Treble: "Beat, Beat, Beat. First off, your doing...
Okay, I TOTALLY get it now! Your right. A 'nameless narrator' is FAR less interesting than a actually witness with beliefs and personality on...
Never thought of it like that. What if I did it like... "The shifting tides of the ocean can be cruel to the even the most skilled sailors. With...
Thank you. I'll be continuing more a little later. I do see how this is... 'a lot' to dump out. My fear with doing that is forgetting to mention...
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