I'm probably a content editor, but the book doctor is sort of close to me, too. Can't really settle on just one.
This is your best little trinket of advice you've been given yet. Also, describe how the character looked down, saw the red liquid dripping down...
It was probably just a typo. Sorry to veer a little off-topic. Back on track!
Great idea! Nice spin on how magic "makes everything better"! With the right application of the plot, you could get this published! But, to...
I think this is very reasonable, leave the racial thing. Perhaps, as other have suggested, make it peer pressure, rejection from others, etc. that...
Well, mine is formed by Tony Hawk clones with Spartan skateboards. Yep, some weird, history-street combo. Oh, did I mention the skateboards shot...
Well, mine consists of vegan nudists.
My army consists of God and Satin working together to cause mass destruction... Did I mention I am also LE MASTER?
So, basically, they'll all agree? Might wanna correct that. But, yes, all these others said the truth. All true. Don't be afraid. What we say...
My army contains terrorists who had children.
I dunno why, but I have a thing for slavery (and not the sexual kind). A book about a slave escaping via the Underground Railroad? Count me in. No...
My army consists of alcoholic wrestlers.
ISTP is supposedly my type. Pretty accurate, I'd say, but it makes me feel a little controversial. Think-it-through, but make split decisions....
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