An important part of the story background would be figuring out where the funding for all this equipment comes from, and how exactly that amount...
The Da Vinci Code.
If you can kill your MC without feeling like you've just lost a relative, you're either a sociopath or a terrible writer. Even if your MC is the...
Drunken orb?
Ooh, I like that one. Resources can, theoretically, be synthesized, but talent can never be.
The technology is cheap and the transplant readily available, but training to use the transplant is risky with a high failure rate. In a post...
Characters with a health issue can be very interesting- Dr House, for example. It all depends on how you write it. If a chronic health issue...
I use Louis Farizee as a pen name so I can be who I really am, not who I pretend to be. If the people in my life saw my writing... well.
Welcome. What is the name of your book? I'll Google for it (commercial links are discouraged).
Oh, yes. Not only is Harry Potter a good example of a Mary Sue (Harry Sue?), but is also a great example of why Mary Sues don't necessarily have...
Roman: I am in constant danger of a mental breakdown, what with all the demons and cross dimensional wizards attempting to murder everyone in New...
Roman: to research an ancient, faceless horror, the likes of which men were not meant to meddle with. Jaffy: to steal something, find a...
We never find out what the gift is, as Roman carefully puts the gift into a metal tub, pours cement over it, waits for it to dry, gets on a boat,...
Talk to as many old people as you can, assuming they were living there at the time. They love to gossip, have nothing better to do, and can give...
Describe the sound of pebbles being kicked up by speeding tires, the blinding clouds if dust, the jostling being caused by ruts and potholes and...
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