If you really don't want to post it in the review rooms, you can send to it to me and I'll give you corrections plus a line-by-line and overall...
Sophie, I'll bet you didn't, and I bet you're beautiful now too! Ashleigh, I genuinely don't think I'm pretty. :-\ Those photos are okay, but in...
No way! I bet you were gorgeous!
Awwwwww, thanks you guys! I bet y'all were pretty at my age though. :) You're all so sweet!
Thanks guys! My hair is naturally a wavy mess (he knows this lol). Neha and Sophie - yes, I'm 13, and you guys needn't hide! I'm really not...
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