Although, after my second cuppa coffee, I could see the [Lloyd Baker wanted to tell people who judged him] as a valid revision. It still retains a...
Uh-oh. Somebody been beatin' over the head too many times with the 'filter' rule, haven't they? Learn it. Know it. Forget it. Makes things a...
Regardless of our deeds--pios,indifferent or amoral--in the end, after we’ve taken that ever-so-sweet last breath, we’re all reduced to fermented...
To be honest, I trudged through GOT here and there but it was such a task I didn't continue the series, but I still think the opening to the first...
I don't read previous responses until after my post so my initial response isn't biased in any way, so some of this may have already been said....
@Iain Heh. Interesting indeed. Just a few weeks back I began writing a rough sketch featuring one of my secondary character's origins and how he...
Nonsense on the competitors, how bout co-conspirators? I'd be interested in reading your work. You saying it's similar piques my interest and I...
Ah. Yes, the gory horror parts, a guilty pleasure that often worms its way into anything I write. But I do appreciate the time and effort of...
In my old critique grounds this whole thing about starting or not-starting a story with dialogue became what we veteran members started to refer...
Okay-okay-okay-okay In the name of all that is full disclosure, I must confess that my humor is merely an illusion, a self-defense mechanism...
I was torn between opening with a lame joke or a witty quote. I decided to go with both. A duck and a chicken walk into a bar with a flying nun*...
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