It's not so much about just cutting entire chapters out, and more about asking yourself: Is this the most effective way of conveying what you need...
This line at the end: "It wasn’t much, but it was one of my everyday dresses." - I'd delete it. Because the next line of dialogue where she says...
without spending too much time on this, since I should be writing instead, my first thought would be this: People go for the same reason that...
If you're going trad, it won't be your concern or your decision. Your books will likely be released in both formats. If you're going...
Thing is, it's not just about the skill level and whether you like their writing, though these things are important. It's about personality -...
Huh, story fuel. Could give it a go! It would at least be productive. I like that :D Thanks!
I've taken to writing irrate comments on FB, only to delete it because I dread the negativity. Why do I write a response to begin with? I'm in...
I've co-authored two things. One fun collaboration that we self-published but that we ultimately took down because it was fun but rather crap...
I'm with you there - any time I see an evil Christian character or some murderer who of course turns out to be a Christian doing everything in the...
I think if you wanted an arc like that, you'd have to write in her questioning the foundations of her own faith. The truth is, given you seem to...
I've actually never seen the film! But that scene you describe sounds funny and rather unfortunate :D
But this is starting to sound like it could be the start of a plot for a thriller! Speculate! We must keep on speculating because I have nothing...
Maybe the dude is German? Seems a strange thing to transfer to another language but... can't think of any other explanation for the random caps lol.
I don't see that there's really any discussion. There's only use every tool effectively. Anyone telling you to never use a tool has no idea what...
Maybe what you have is historical fantasy? And welcome @Jordan Hart :) I learnt plenty when I first joined this forum. I don't frequent much...
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