I went to high school with a girl named Bianca. She was beautiful.
No problem. I just assumed I was developing characters too fast, hence why I posted it there. No biggie. Thanks for the responses.
That is one of my flaws, I struggle with that and work to fix it. Thanks for pointing that out. Also, sorry about posting in the wrong section.
Good advice. I need to learn to be more descriptive in my work. I agree it's flat.
In the first paragraph of chapter one of my story, I introduce three names of characters. What are the thoughts on this? I'm a real amateur at...
I make my living from writing. Writing sales invoices.
Maybe the language barrier can be short-lived? For example: "Benour trekknoy es shackelton," the man begins to shout while pointing at his...
Yes, happening right here in the states. Great advice, thank you!
Accidental double post.
Thanks for the advice. What I meant by it not being normal is this isn't a high crime place, seeing a roped off crime scene isn't something he'd...
I'm in the middle of fictional thriller/crime story I'm writing. It is very rough, and very young as a project. I am a writing amateur but...
In my opinion, I think they're closely related but they are not the same.
Separate names with a comma.
