Seems there are still some myths about the self-publishing industry. 1/ You will earn money by self-publishing, it doesn't cost you money. You...
I don't think it's a good idea to make dialogues like that, why would you like to do it? It makes your book look like some instant messenger chat...
If a sentence has great emotion into it you should use and emotional verb / emotional adjectives in the sentence. So the reader will immediately...
Separate names with a comma.