I think you can use Habitue Pilgrims, I don't see a problem with that. What about just calling it Habitue or Habitues? Then you are giving away a...
Obviously I'm no expert but I think this would work/get round the problem.
I like what you've got and I agree that your line may not have the same hook if you changed it? Without knowing how you direct the story after...
Hey Im gonna check this chapter out since I wanna include a battle in space, so it will help really, either to see how good or badly it has been...
Thank you everyone I better start reading as many of your suggestions as I can lol
Hey people Has anyone got any recommended for any books/novels that have great battle scenes (hand to hand, guns and swords)? I have already...
Yeah guns and super saiyan powers but the powers will mostly be used in one on one battles between the main characters and enemies. Ive tried...
What makes a great fight scene in a novel? What are the keys things to include to make it extra special or stand out from the rest!! In my...
Hello everyone my name is Nadine and I'am from England currently having a lovely holiday in Nevis! I am currently writing a fantasy/sci-fi...
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