Thanks everyone. I think thickening it out with extra conflicts will help and I'll start varying the pace a little more. Better get writing now...
With the story I'm currently writing, and just generally in any story I do write, I tend to progress with the plot fairly fast. I have made a...
Thanks for everyones advice, it's helped a lot. I think I'll write down information just so I don't forget and for my own general use. I'm the...
Well I've pretty much got the plot of my story and the course of events right to the end sorted out. The question I have is whether it would add...
Maybe Todd could be the physically deformed kid and the MC discovers that the other kids shunned him when it happened and the MC and Todd become...
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No more running, came the voice in Isaac's head. He had been running for as long as he remembered, but it all stopped now. He had stopped and...
I did think that the over-hearing a conversation part would be too easy and have already got another way. I know it does resemble the typical...
That's a point that I was thinking of. Would there not be ways to prove it was your idea such as the date on the post or something?
I think that your idea is a good one and although it may follow a typical fantasy template, which story of that genre doesn't :P. I think your...
Here's the idea I've been toying with. Title: Those Who Fight Furthest (inspired by a Final Fantasy song, but has relevance to the plot)...
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