I would just make sure these extra scenes/characters have something to achieve or their own goals separate from the protagonist, which would make...
Instead of making the focal point some piece of jewelry, think about how he uses his powers or what drives him to use it. Did he make a deal that...
Hello everyone, My name is Naveed, I've been working on a surprisingly long novel for the last year; a co-worker of mine said that there...
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