Your plot sounds very interesting, and I like how you've changed the characteristics of the vampires in your book, making the vampirism inherited...
When I was little, I just would always just tell my baby sitter repeatedly that, "Yes, mom lets me put chocolate syrup on my PB sandwich. And...
Yeah, mostly I make it up as I go along. But the first draft is usually so brief its practically an outline, so I rewrite and use the story...
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