Snapshot 20130120
Exasperation? Bemusement? There are a lot of potential words to fit that blank. On a different note, I don't really see how she's a bad driver....
I'd take it a step further and suggest making it two complete sentences by eliminating the the phrase "as words and." After, of course, making...
When you mentioned that you feel like your works read like screenplays, it reminded me immediately of The Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss. He...
I was part of this community a few years back under a different screenname (I don't even remember what it was now). I'm sure it has changed a lot...
I'd have to agree with minstrel on this one. Using an extended dialogue tag at the end of the sentence detracts from the urgency inherent in the...
Separate names with a comma.
