You could take the Cthulhu route. He's so powerful that humans don't even register as a tiny threat of any kind, nor a nuisance, nor even anything...
At times, people will just stop talking and won't respond to anyone. You could be speaking to them over and over again from two inches away, and...
Reminds me of the woman who got burned by her coffee and (successfully) sued McDonald's.
Worlds that are too small feel unrealistic, in my opinion. On the other hand, information dumping is only a good thing very,very rarely. Only...
A couple of things to get out of the way. . . It seems very unlikely that Sierra's aunt would end up teaching her class by chance, so perhaps you...
Happens to me all the time. I think many writers have this problem to some extent. I find that it happens more easily and more quickly if you...
Also, Martial_Wolf, good catch. I can't believe I had that large of an oversight. I will have to change Saeyyr's name. Thanks for the heads up....
I never said that the female characters were weak. . . the one has a compromised immune system, but she's also a member of the Thallian...
Agreed Congratulations, and may all your writing be fruitful. :)
I'd appreciate it if people could let me know what they would think, and what their emotions would be during and upon finishing reading a novel...
Use the Two-Tailed Vampire Cat of Nabashima. I hope I remembered that name correctly... Seriously though, Twilight is horrible. Any other...
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