Sorry, i'm just using a really old monitor, and it's very hard to see through it. My grammar is fine, it's the screen itself.
But the plot is...
I actually think, the only thing that scares people anymore, are movies, where they have a small dark room, and extremely eerie and scary...
Not a bad idea.
Thats actually not a bad idea.
I say stick with it. It sounds good.
Hi, my name is Raxxus Von Harken, andc this is my first post.
No, my real name isn't Raxxus..It would be pretty sweet though, aye?
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