I don't think there should be a problem as long as the changes are clear to the reader. You should also take note of what peachalulu said about...
It is nice to get some clarification on the matter. The owner seems like a good person, but since it was in fact against the law, there was no...
Ok then, I apologize for that, it was wrong of me to assume that. My confusion came from you posting them in the same post without clarifying, but...
I agree with you, Shadowwalker. It seems that because christianity is a "first-world" religion (that is to say, it has a huge prescence in first...
In this regard you are correct, but only if we're talking about christians or any of the major religions. But again, it is a completely harmless...
I know it isn't my place to butt in into this conversation since I'm barely a member here and never talk, but I do have to say that perhaps you...
I would advise you to at least keep the tour part in separate document. That way everytime you want to reference something from the tour, you have...
You don't need a big set up for that. You can start the story narrating briefly why they are there and how they got there. I mean, it's like, you...
Well, you yourself said that a lot of the events happening before the abduction were pointless, so yeah, remove them. As for the romance and other...
Double post.
My best advice would be to set parameters as to what the supernatural creature(s) can do. For example, don't say in one chapter that they flew...
As long as you don't overuse it I think it's fine. If you manage to do it well it would certainly be great to have it.
Separate names with a comma.
