eek! I agree with you. Forget the apostrophe. The sentence is trying to do too many things at once and doesn't have enough words to make it work...
I've been researching the internet, trying to better understand the use of conjunctions as the start of a sentence. In some cases it works...
Oh, if only I could get away with doing just that... a boat, peace and quiet, and only a book to keep me company. <sighs> But I see what you...
Okay, I'm not sure this is in the right section. My apologies if it is not. A friend helped me get in touch with an editor with a publishing...
Before I started writing, I played RPGs - table top, with pencil, paper and dice. You know, like D&D. When running those games, I would come up...
I created a character years ago for my AD&D gaming group. They knew him only as 'The Black'. He was what I considered a Palladin of an evil...
Not sure if this belongs here or somewhere else. Since punctuation is a part of it, I'll start here. Here's a sentence that my question refers...
Thinking about every movie I've seen and book I've read that had any mention of secret documents, there is never any detail on how such documents...
Here's a parallel: The alien is like the English language, so complex that it takes some years to learn but never master. And humans are like...
I would even consider the possibility that you don't actually need to add in the spoken words at all. The wizard said something under his...
You say the scientist is 'obviously insane'. That might go without say, but if he's done anything to be considered 'clinically insane', the...
I'm curious what others think. The project I'm working on is written completely in 1st person. As an exercise, I wrote what happened to the first...
Separate names with a comma.