Those sentences are sound. Nice try though.
Addressing the thread title, I'd say never ignore a critique. I think, in even the most harsh critiques, information can be gleaned that aid in...
I look at it like this. Say I'm just starting a story, and their a lot of backdrop that I want to drop my character in to. I have to set the...
Whats up everyone. Stumbled onto this site when I accidentally when to writingforums.org instead of writingforums.com. I look forward to reading...
Separate names with a comma.