It depends on the tone of your book. If you said yourself they sound cheesy, you are obviously forcing them and you would probably be better off...
Thanks Banzai, It looks like a fabulous site :)
Thanks Brit in France, I appreciate the welcome :)
Hello fellow writers :) I'm another avid reader/writer who loves to discuss all topics on writing. I'm lucky enough to have completed a few...
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