Perhaps these people who aren't adapted feel special. Even though don't have the modified traits, they see themselves as 'originals' and have some...
I think the cover is now done, thanks guys for all the feedback, hope to help you out some day.
How about "The Other Neighbours" as a work-in-progress title? You can change it any once your story evolves. I found this sentence a bit long:...
OK. Great, error corrected. I redid the spine, removed the logo and changed the size of text, looks a bit less messy and easier to read. Here is...
@General Daedalus - Which text are you referring to?
Centred it is then. He's the final cover I'm going to sign off: [IMG]
Here it is centered: [IMG] Here it is justified: [IMG] Thanks for taking the time to give feedback, much appreciated.
Having been dropped on his head several times as a baby, Ben was excelling in the stupidity department. He fancies an intelligent girl, Anna, but...
I like that "Excelling in the stupidity department" [IMG]
@Selbbin Thanks for the feedback. I've made a few changes to the blurb, does this now read a bit better and drum up some interest?
Thanks so much for the feedback, much appreciated. Here is a new mockup, as regards to the design, still working on the actual blurb: [IMG]
Thanks, not unhelpful, just honest. I'll go back to the drawing board, as they say, and try again. How about this: Ben is slightly lacking in...
I've made a few changes, does it look any better? [IMG]
Thanks, it's looking better now. What would I use the QR code for? Where would I link to?
What do you think of this design? [IMG]
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