Hello J.P. I'm doing fine...today I took off work 'cause it's too stinky-hot. :) Lol, yes. Cats heighten the word 'individualism'
The same story can be told in many ways, just because someone else thought of it first, doesn't mean you can give it a different pov. Write...
Welcome to the site. There are lots of interesting threads for you to voice an opinion on as well as threads for stories and poems.
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I have used the technique you gave an example with before. For me I do this to break the dialogue but not use dialogue tags(which tell often more...
No, it is still incorrect. As the dialogue has not been broken, the " tags are not required at the end of the first para, nor at the beginning-end...
You mean cats have to get along? :( I always thought it was all about them. :)
I believe in that case you only need one set of " " rather than have each para enclosed by them.
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Wow this is long and I don't understand why you are sharing your idea. If you are unsure of your story half-way through, then I have doubts also....
I recommend you cover your screen just before you begin to type, that way your eyes don't stop/edit/reflect on word choices and the flow remains...
39) The pen is mightier than the sword....more poets died that way. :(
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