I heard Olivia's breathing quicken and her blanket rustled. She always did this upon waking up. I secretly hoped she would fall back asleep, so I...
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Kyrie, Lilyanna, Camilla. These all sound very whimsical, yet still something the reader can relate to.
How old is your kid? 3 When do they start asking questions about their environment, like why something is the way it is? She hasn't started...
So I have been meandering around the site for a few weeks now, but I never made an introduction. I'm Brooke. I have been easing back into writing...
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They sound too over the top for me. I think with adding mental illness to a story you need to be subtle about it. Try to make the characters...
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