You know, I think I figured it out. Once I stopped panicking about it of course! I'm not using 'he though' any more. :)
I think the problem lies in what I am trying to write. This is a new character, at the beginning of the book, completely alone, basically in the...
Oh gosh, now I am getting picky. I think I will try italics for thoughts, but what about noises? Would it be 'splat' or splat? I'm rewriting...
Thank you so much for your replies. I will have a good read of that thread now too :)
When writing in the 3rd person perspective, how do I write what the characters are thinking? In speech bubbles, like regular speech but with...
Thanks so much guys :) I will have a good look around the forums tonight, and see if I can be brave and join in a little! (Oh yes, before I...
Hi there, I'm a 28 year old Mummy to two boys from the UK and have just started writing again for the first time since I was a teenager. I like...
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