As Mckk says, perhaps make sure that the character isn't as self-involved as Bella apparently is. Narrate some of her thought processes, why is...
Have you thought about looking up some documentaries dealing with disabilities and coping with the changes they cause? I can't think of any...
Thanks for the advice guys, The POV character is the only one in the book, he's the main philosophical voice and I'm envisioning him talking about...
For me, clichés are a very relative thing. If you use one heavily cliched character type, for example, but the world you put him in is absolutely...
Hi all!, I've just started on my scifi/fantasy novel series and could do with a bit of input regarding surrounding context and internal...
Haha thanks, I'll try and keep the rambling to a minimum, its just that I'm nervous, you're all so attractive and it's been a while :p
Hi everyone, After daydreaming my way through the last few years of school and most of university I've finally finished my exams and started...
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