Depending on how you frame the start of their relationship it can make perfect sense that the secondary character is gay. If the secondary...
My general philosophy is to create deep, complex characters with their own flaws, motivations, fears, and desires. Generally, I try to make this...
Is the revelation the core concept of the story? Is it why your readers are reading? If so, don't spoil it. If it is a backdrop and isn't as...
I recommend including training sequences but have them in small snipits throughout it, and have the scenes during the training not be about the...
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