Okay, thanks. I reposted one that I think is more clear. I think I hit all your points. Please let me know what you think.
Dear Literary Agent, Resurrection, youth, and immortality are waiting for Emmaline Evan’s on the planet of Tredecim- or at least they were, until...
It’s been awhile, but I thought I’d take another stab at this query. I cut down my word count awhile back and reordered the entire story. I have...
I finally figured it out. I started a free trial on JerichoWriters and it lists those who are specifically looking for erotica. (In case anyone...
There must be something I’m missing. When I search for literary agents for erotica, I find agents for romance. I can’t imagine sending something...
James82, you are referencing one of the initial query letters I posted. Did you read the most recent one?
This is very helpful. Some things would have to be omitted or changed, but yes, if they were friends, although the story would be less...
Sigh. All good advice. Just conflicted. I was looking at comparable s this morning and will do that more. I actually never read sci-fi, which...
Tenderiser, are you saying that the last one I posted also sounds like sci-fi? I appreciate any and all feedback, just trying to make sure that...
It has a lot of both. I kept writing my query as sci-fi because it felt like once I wrote about the details of what happened, there was no room...
I’m in a good mood and am ready to try again! Maybe this is better. Maybe it’s crap. What say you? Dear Mr. or Mrs. Literary Agent, (XYZ) is...
First, I would like to say I am terrible with query letters, so take my advice with a grain of salt. I think your query is so, so close. It’s an...
Glad to have found this post. You have great reviews. I went ahead and submitted ten pages. Look forward to hearing from you!
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