People listen to certain music because it puts us in a certain mood. Movies use soundtracks to goad the audience into feeling a certain emotion...
EVERY single good idea has been done before. It's your job to make your reader THINK your story is new. You do that with characters and setting....
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Does anyone else enjoy the editing process more than the actual writing? It seems everything I read in books and online all refer to the...
If you want to keep it with the exact wording you've already written, then I would take out all commas so it reads: He sighed as he watched...
The way you have it written could be grammatically correct, but the colon in this situation gives it a...
Separate names with a comma.