Thanks for the link! I am going to have to condense the story/idea here to the aforementioned 1000 word limit, but thanks for your comment! :)
Thanks for your criticism! I do feel that the plot is very typical and lack originality, though as this is a GCSE creative writing task, I do only...
Ah! Great idea, now I have a 'bridge' to link the introduction to conclusion! :)
The image above is my stimulus, which is based around the plot of my story as follow-
-Time period/historical background: European...
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