It's supposed to be fantasy. I believe your reader is projecting themselves into the role of the MC and giving you tgeir personal feelings as...
Youtube videos of the old german blimps. That should give you some good references. You can also look up people flying on a plane for the first...
To avoid further confusion, i suggest using multiverse theory. He travels back to an alternate his own past and creates a branch in the timeline....
That's not bad at all! It really boils down to what actually happened to the park and how you lay out your breadcrumbs for the MC to follow. If...
Sounds a lot like Riddick. Not saying it's a bad model to follow, just that it's been done. The biggest problem is your hook. If you can build it...
Honestly, any reason would be good. From an Adam's Family esc buried treasure to ill gotten fortunes/property, a city inspector/councilman trying...
I've never know a woman to quickly get over any emotion. One emotion can overpower another, but females are perpetually filtering the world...
depending on how developed the "shirt" is, it could be anywhere from a simple animal skin covering to a form of leather armor. Your descriptor...
Best of both worlds, you could always have the character in question reference something as the reason for their actions. This illudes to events...
A lord would never send his main force into an enemy territory to be slaughtered. The lird would likely hire mercenaries and such to try and kill...
War and death change people. Theres a reason soldiers today have to go through a process to reintegrate back into society, and even then it...
I see you're not a greedy person. I'm afraid to tell you that most companies would rather spend insane amounts of money to win lawsuits than to...
the best mechanic i can offer that's not often used in these cliche situations is to have character A plan a betrayal of the gang and get them all...
Personally, i write everything down. Every inspiring idea that I feel i could write about gets jotted down. My stories are the same. I have a...
If it feels rushed, make filler content in areas you're sure give the greatest sense of being rushed. By filler, i'm referring to character...
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