The main thing in any story is to have internal consistancy in the logic. If your book has no mention of ghosts and is entirely realistic until...
I'm currently writing a series which is fantasy set in a 30s-esque world. I'm currently polishing the first novella. The MC is a knight, but the...
The second is correct and if you look out for it I'm sure you will see it when reading in the future. Normally '?' and '!' do end a sentence,...
It depends on the context. 'turned in to pressure'? I don't think that makes sense. On the other hand number 2 sounds clunky 'He gave into...
Yeah. Write a book that you want to read. Hopefully that way someone else will too. Trying to aim at a best sellign market is only going to fail...
It can work. It depends on the style of the story. If it is a light hearted action romp then it might be enough to go with the stererotypical view...
The narrator talking to the reader is a very old fashioned technique. It depends on the type of story you are telling. I have used it in a story...
I would withdraw it. Send a brief but polite email asking for it to be withdrawn. Then submit it to new markets.
You should definatly read as much as you can if you want to write. But not just in your own genre. Read everything anyeerything. Most good...
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