Thundair's Recent Activity

  1. Thundair replied to the thread Balancing between character, setting, and plot..

    As you probably know, your work could be plot driven or character driven....

    Dec 14, 2019 at 2:59 AM
  2. Thundair replied to the thread Share Your First Three Sentences.

    I lked the setting but I didn't like this sentence break. Digging up our cat, that died ten years ago. I wondered if a cat is a who. We...

    Dec 13, 2019 at 5:00 AM
  3. Thundair liked The Dapper Hooligan's post in the thread When does Erotica become Porn?.

    I really hope that doesn't make Mein Kampf porn for some people.

    Dec 13, 2019 at 3:39 AM
  4. Thundair liked Some Guy's post in the thread When does Erotica become Porn?.

    OP When it catapults off your lap?

    Dec 13, 2019 at 3:39 AM
  5. Thundair replied to the thread What Are You Reading Now..

    The Black Monk pg 1

    Dec 12, 2019 at 8:26 PM
  6. Thundair liked Lew's post in the thread Contractions in dialogues in Fantasy writing.

    Each of my historical fiction characters have a unique voice, and the voice will determine whether they should or should not use...

    Dec 12, 2019 at 6:33 PM
  7. Thundair replied to the thread When does Erotica become Porn?.

    For me, it’s only porn if you don’t want to be caught reading it.

    Dec 12, 2019 at 6:30 PM
  8. Thundair liked Lew's post in the thread The Point of View questions thread.

    First person can be very powerful, but you can mix POVs with it. Diane Gabaldon did it with Outlander. While probably 99% of her work...

    Dec 11, 2019 at 5:41 PM
  9. Thundair replied to the thread Contractions in dialogues in Fantasy writing.

    In my novel in the nineteenth century, I struggled with contractions and I’m sure there is a post somewhere on this forum. Through my...

    Dec 9, 2019 at 5:52 PM
  10. Thundair liked Gary Wed's post in the thread Contractions in dialogues in Fantasy writing.

    My first piece of advice is to not put much stock in what others are doing. Generally that is a distraction. The assumption that author...

    Dec 9, 2019 at 5:43 PM
  11. Thundair liked Naomasa298's post in the thread Things That Annoy Me, But Shouldn't.

    People who start sentences with "so". Unless it is followed by "a needle pulling thread".

    Dec 9, 2019 at 5:39 PM
  12. Thundair liked guy9859's post in the thread What's in a name?.

    There should be names for the main characters. Secondary characters could stay with first names depending on the amount of interaction...

    Dec 9, 2019 at 12:32 AM
  13. Thundair replied to the thread Accidentally setting fire to things.

    After reading Animal Farm, the pigs deserve it. Burn them to a crisp.

    Dec 8, 2019 at 6:43 PM
  14. Thundair liked Raven484's post in the thread Do you self publish because?.

    If I ever finish my work, I would probably go self publish. I probably will not make any money, but I can say I published something. I...

    Dec 7, 2019