Thundair's Recent Activity

  1. Thundair replied to the thread "Dreyer's English" -- a great style book.

    I was always taught that a preposition wasn’t a good thing to end a sentence with.:) I started reading it and liked the part about going...

    Aug 19, 2019 at 3:30 AM
  2. Thundair liked Oscar Leigh's post in the thread What do you love about your story?.

    I like using all the little historical details, as much as is reasonable to reference in a story, about the dress, the food, the culture...

    Aug 18, 2019 at 6:01 PM
  3. Thundair replied to the thread [Help with plot] In a brothel.

    Each one of us would envision a version of an outcome that you may not have in mind. The author controls the narrative, and that’s where...

    Aug 16, 2019 at 4:04 PM
  4. Thundair replied to the thread Your Story in Five Words.

    Blood dripped from her fingers.

    Aug 13, 2019
  5. Thundair liked deadrats's post in the thread writing without a fully developed plot.

    Planning too much messes me up. So, I don't do it. I just write. It works for me. And my novel is a murder mystery of sorts. I'm about...

    Aug 13, 2019
  6. Thundair liked big soft moose's post in the thread murderer, killer, hitman.

    I can't imagine a kindergartener being hard to kill - I also can't imagine anyone sympathising with an MC who kills little kids Also...

    Aug 13, 2019
  7. Thundair replied to the thread writing without a fully developed plot.

    I recently started a short story about a teenager who was sent to a Boot Camp and I wanted to show her struggle of growth and maturity....

    Aug 13, 2019