Just a short comment, "said a dark-skin, dark hair young man at a fair skin, fiery red haired lady", that really threw me off. I had to re-read it...
And thank you everyone for the warm welcoming.
That's nice :). Hmm, maybe I won't get it published in 2011, but if I can actually finish it this time around it will be a start.
Hey there, I'm Kristy. I've been writing for about eight years, it is one of my passions and someday I hope to publish a novel. Just in case...
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