In this sentence, which is correct? His pallid skin clung to every bone of his head. His pallid skin was clinging to every bone of his head....
Hi there. I'm currently editing my WIP (and have been doing so for the past 4 months!) and i have just came across this sentence: 'Michael...
She doesn't need a diagnosis unless it's important to the story. A lot of writers I've spoken to always seem to think they must label their...
Why do you feel like you need to start more sentences with verbs? I often think: 'I need to be more descriptive here', or 'my character needs...
Have you actually written all of the novels, or just outlined them? To be frank, it's impossible for anyone to judge the quality of your work...
I find it boring to read and write huge chunks of description. I prefer straight-to-the-point descriptions. If there's a vase on the table, tell...
I've recently downloaded the entire works of Charles Dickens for Kindle, and have just began Oliver Twist. I'm fascinated by the...
I usually say things like: "Andrew scrunched his face"; "Andrew stared"; "Andrew's eyes clouded over"; "Andrew furrowed his brow" to show...
Hi, everyone. I've been registered to this site for over a year and this is my first official post. I have gained a lot of advice from...
Separate names with a comma.