Thanks for the insight. You nailed it on the head with explaining!
I have been writing in third person restricted, but I want to write my MC's thoughts/ inner dialog in first person present tense with a past tense...
I heard rumor that some novels do brackets or various symbols to really highlight this voice. I don't want the reader to have to scan back over...
I have done research and have it down, they're aware of each other, but as far as conveying to the readers is my concern. It all has a purpose.
That Now that sounds interesting! It's only one voice though, thank goodness. The voice is very aggressive and mean in nice terms.
Only one entity! No multiple and it is aloud replies to a voice in his head. Thanks for the tip.
Imagine having a nagging internal voice! How do you structure and or format that internal dialogue. Though my MC does talk aloud sometimes, but...
So I'm lost on whether to do internal dialog in first person or third! The story is in restricted thrid person, but I have seen forums say that...
I genuinely appreciate your help BTW! Like it's awesome!
I will check that book out for sure!! Thanks for the reference. Weirdly enough at first the voice is known as... 'Voice' but it does have a name...
If you can imagine like a big mouth but of course it's not sex related!
I understand that feeling. I debated too, but that voice, at least to me, is a key fundamental element of the story and it is a running theme. I...
Thanks, they definitely have very different perspective and personalities but with three people talking it's like... Okay is this too tasking?...
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