I'd suggest reading different books set in medieval times. Could you describe the scene more? Is it just two people, or part of a large battle?
Don't just focus on two people in a spar. Show their surroundings, how they are feeling, their reactions. It doesn't need to just be he hit she...
Actually it is neither. She becomes blind instantly in an accident (I've done some research so it's possible). So actually half of her point of...
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Flowers for Algernon and Dante's Inferno blew my mind. Didn't really change my perspective of life though.
In a story I'm working on, there are multiple characters where the story is told from their perspective. One of these characters is blind. One of...
I generally visualize it like I'm watching a TV show. I then try to write the best description for what I see possible.
If it really makes the story as you seem to describe it, then kill the main character. It can't be about your feelings for the character it needs...
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