I would suggest this instead: "Every way he turned, Jack could tell where they were." Or better yet, "Jack was so confident in his sense of...
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This is the best suggestion I've seen so far. Though I would change 'came to' to 'woke' or something else. Came to sounds good aloud but doesn't...
I had a very frustrating time helping someone get their book published through Amazon. I heartily recommend doing a comparison between KDP and...
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