Alright, I think I understand what you're trying to say. Thanks, all of you!
Okay, so here's one of the pieces I've been having trouble with. "Before I could say anything else, before the grief kicked in, I walked over to...
Hi, this is my first thread, so sorry if this is all awkward. So I've been having some trouble portraying emotion in my writing. I don't mean...
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