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    I need fantasy words!

    Discussion in 'Fantasy' started by shadowblade, Aug 12, 2020.

    Hi, I’m new here and I’m writing a fantasy book, but there’s a problem: I don’t really know much about swords and knives and daggers, I need help with that, and also, I suck at writing battle scenes. If you have any advice, please reply, like any fantasy advice, anything relating to fantasy at all because I love it!!!
     
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    My suggestion to you would be read some of the stories in the Fantasy section of the Workshop. Not a lot will be served by giving you a list of words. I could kust main-gauches, pauldrons and besagews, onagers and arbalests, but it's not going to mean much without context.
     
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    read some bernard cornwell - the arthur and saxon stories... its not fantasy per se but he does give good battle scene ... my advice is not to get too bogged down in technical terms, you want to show vibrant action, not write a learned treatise on sword play
     
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    For writing battle scenes, read fantasy that has battle scenes you like. You'll have to do a bit of looking. It's pretty hard to write genre without reading it first. I personally haven't read A Song of Fire and Ice, but my brother has said that its combat scenes are amazing. Don't just focus on the scene itself, however, think about the build up that lends it meaning. It doesn't matter what kind of scene it is: it will be boring if it doesn't have some kind of significance.

    It also seems you're using the term fantasy to mean broad medieval period fantasy. That's fine, most people do. Personally I recommend some general history of commodities and empire. Stuff like history of salt, coal, iron, etc... really shines a light on the technical limitations and lifestyles of those times. Not for the purpose of jamming it all down the reader's throat, but to add leagues of verisimilitude to the story (and even help with plotting, for example a salt works would be an important strategical landmark worth skirmishing over, but how many fantasies talk about salt as an important resource? It's always gold this and lumber that:wtf:, but I digress).

    How much you'll research weapon types/deployment depends on how much to care for your story to be reasonably 'realistic' (quotes because that's an infinitely debatable thing anyway). Honestly, your paying audience likely isn't bothered that mr/mrs spaghetti can manage a few dozen ~100lb bow draws without breaking a sweat. It does make me cringe, but not enough to put down the book. Anyway, start with Google, perhaps learn about some good books from there. Broad knowledge doesn't hurt.
     
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    Because it's my genre of choice, and because my ability to recall words when I need them is lacking, I keep a medieval/fantasy word list. If you think you might write more fantasy stories you might consider starting one of your own.
     
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    Thank you!
     
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    Thanks so much to everyone that replied. :)
     
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    Entrails. Entrails is a good word.
     
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    Misericord. A long, thin dagger designed for putting wounded knights out of their misery.

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    I always imagine Knights being equipped with a regal cutlass which is a slightly curved short sword. Another great source for great weapon names is RPG's - computer/console games like the Final Fantasy series, or card/dice games like Dungeons and Dragons.
     
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    Apart from the specifics, you will need to research to write your battle scene, remember the fundamentals of writing an action scene. Place the reader and characters in the scene. Ask yourself what's at stake, what is the point of the scene, is it relevant to the book. Consider how to build action, too intensify it. Allow the reader a lull/rest and to take stock. Figure your endpoint so that the battle scene flows naturally into the next scene. There will be a lot going on so make sure you stop and plan as much as possible and research where necessary. If it gets messy, take a step back and recheck your plans. If it were me I would plan a simple short scene and build on it.

    I think the others are right, reading will be very helpful but I think writing your own drafts as well as being well-read on a subject is a great combination.
     
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    There is nothing more off-putting to me, as a reader who DOES occasionally read and enjoy fantasy, than battle scenes (especially as opening scenes) which have no context and no content other than slash wallop thud, fancy swordplay, charging horses, etc.

    Battle scenes need to 'matter.' They shouldn't just be an excuse to show off expertise with weaponry and battle tactics, if you want to engage the general reader. Why is this battle being fought? What are the stakes? What happens if side A wins (or loses.) What is the attitude of the people fighting this battle? Are they desperate? (Why?) Are they confident/overconfident (Why?) Are they being well or poorly led? Was this a planned battle or one that just broke out spontaneously?

    We need to know what's at stake, who's involved, and why it matters. It's not 'intriguing' to just watch slash wallop thud blood. We need some investment in the origin and the outcome, as well as the battle itself.

    I'd say don't focus overmuch on the weaponry. Focus on why this battle is being fought.
     
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    I hear what you're saying, but often opening battles are character establishing shots. Show don't tell that Hrod is a mighty warrior as he thuds, whallops, and slashes his way through the fray. Think of the opening of Highlander. The battle is unimportant, but it shows that Connor McLeod is immortal and Kergan is going to be the primary antagonist. Those other random Scots will be worms' meat one way or another before the story even really starts, whatever their quarrel was.
     
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    Yeah, but that's very character-driven, and you focus on them, don't you?. I'm talking about the kinds of battle scenes where nobody stands out, and it's just armies whacking hell out of each other because it's fun to script a battle.

    I didn't mean the whole history of the run-up to the battle needs to be there. But SOMETHING does. In the case of Highlander, it establishes the protagonist and the antagonist as people, one of whom is immortal. That'll do to be going on with. But in a movie, this will be done via focus shots, facial expressions, etc—we may initially be drawn to one of the characters and repelled by the other, and may be able to figure out their emotional state and how their minds are working. The trick is to do this in writing, when you're opening your story. Don't just describe he whacked, he slashed, he got bloody, the other guy whacked and slashed and HE got bloody and it went back and forth for ages and then one of them got killed. Chapter Two....
     
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    In The Illearth War, by Wreybies' favourite author, there are several battles, but I think the best one is the final battle - which takes place entirely in the background. It provides a backdrop for what the POV character is doing at the time (desperately trying to save his army from being annihilated).
     
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    Can you be more specific, though? Rule number one when it comes to melee weapons is that context is very, very important. Like, do you have any particular questions about swords and knives and daggers?`
     
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    If I were to write battle scenes, first I'd watch fantasy movies with battle scenes. Then if there was a book published first and the movie was filmed from the book, I'd see how it was written in the book.
     
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    There is a fantastic battle scene in The Lady of The Lake - the final Witcher series book.
     
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    Here is the basics of all the elements of a sword. :)
    https://www.swordsknivesanddaggers.com/anatomy-of-a-sword.html

    Mind you in most Medieval Fantasy settings, people forget about polearms,
    the fun toys with reach like pikes, pole axes, spears, warhammers, and the
    like. and don't confuse a flail and a mace. Flails have ropes or chains, and
    maces do not. :)

    Watching and reading up on HEMA (Historical European Martial Arts)
    which also can be found for other cultures during the period as well), will
    give you some ideas of how human with metal stabby stabs work, even
    with the big Great Sword that is probably taller than the armor plated person
    wielding it.
    Every weapon has it's uses, but takes measure of skill and control to master it.

    Mind you that swords and knives are not explicit to Fantasy, and can and have
    shown up in Sci-fi. Cause even when your high tech flash light runs out of
    power, it is still a good idea to have a pointy metal thing in reserve. :p

    Fire arrows are kinda a flashy thing in shows. More functional means of ranged
    flamey doom, is with arrows that have a small cage behind the pointy head that
    can house lit coals that can spark up the fire.

    And at the extreme end of all of this, using weapons that are massively bigger than
    the user (Guts Manga, the buster sword, etc.) will not so much as be a hindrance
    to a normal human, provided they can heft such a large piece of honed steel to
    begin with. Simply put; once you swing said sword, the weight and inertia will be
    so great that the user can't stop it, and will fling them around exposing them to
    attacks or possibly injuring themselves in the process. Just cause it looks cool, it
    won't feel so cool when your hero/heroine has all the joints in their arms pulled
    apart by their massive sword leaving them with essentially noodles attached at
    the shoulders. :D
    Physics says that yes there is a thing such as 'too big'.

    And last but not least, don't forget that physical exhaustion is a thing for pretty much
    every creature and being on a given battle field. So insane fighting at peak performance
    isn't really practical without periods of rest.

    Good luck and I hope this has been helpful in some capacity. :)
     
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    Very good points. Check out this link to a Poul Anderson essay on some of the problems CT mentioned: https://www.writingforums.org/resources/on-thud-and-blunder.378/
     
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    For weaponry, decide what kind of period/ locales you want your setting to resemble most, then get the suitable Osprey guide- they're inexpensive, short and sweet, beautifully illustrated, every bit of armor, gear, and weaponry described. Examples:

    Byzantine Naval Forces 1261-1461
    Imperial Chinese Armies 200BC - 589AD
    Aztec Warrior AD 1325-1521

    Also, just read a lot of fantasy. IMO nobody writes a fight scene better than Robert E Howard.
     
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