Describing things is hard without giving a play by play.

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  1. Bluefire

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    It's defniatly both, this builds her character, as her training partner would say, "You're a child who lacks the discipline and brutality to survive in this world."
     
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    An important thing to know is that she is basically a realm-walker, the book began with her in a different realm and time-line, and then she was transported to a different realm/timeline, she's 17 and she's lived most of her life in the realm that the book started in, so she's in a while new world and has no idea how to protect herself, hince why's she's learning because her learning these techniques plays into a bigger role.
     
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    This is a bit beyond what I know how to write. Good luck.
     
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    Lol thanks for your help anyhow!
     
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    It seems to me that play by play description is important in a few cases, like in confrontations and altercations, but not in general scenes, where development can be tightened up and move faster, helping draw on reader interest.
     

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