he got angry?(this sentence was like telling to the reader rather than showing...) in how many ways can we write this?
When I wrote my rough draft, well puking it on paper and I did a lot of telling. I am now going back converting all the "telling" to "showing"....
It's currently open until the end of the year. I'm thinking it's a good idea to send my MS, but I wanted to get some feedback. I'm getting the...
i have a love for words, grammar, spelling, & how they look. i find myself getting almost angry when i see them being abused :mad: a 'friend'...
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