I am posting the whole segment for clarity... My question is when writting in a voice that is ebonicly inclined but at the same time also foreign is this an effetive usage? Hurrying through the maze of hallways to the room she reached the doorway. Entering, she was exactly 10 minuets early. Taking her name from the board she went to her assigned station and waited. Slowly students started to meander in and at 2:29 Professor Shamlin entered the room and closed the door smacking his Shillelagh on the floor three times. This sealed the entry, baring anyone from entering the room; this particular Shillelagh as one unfortunate Demon had learned is loaded, making it easier for the Leprechaun to disarm his opponent it was long and black, shiny and weighted at its knobby top making it the perfect weapon for someone of his stature. “All right ye wee ones time to get this show on the road as it were. Is everyone ready?” He began “Check ye ink wells and grab yer bonnets it’s going to be a wild ride.” The class erupted into chuckles. “Take yer quill and slide box out, ye can open it en’ a moment. First a few rules, theres be no talkin’, no cheatin’ and no leavin’ with out me permission. Ye got five minuets to review before the spell is cast. After that ye be knowin’ thee rules.” He finished. Tamari raised her hand, lighting quick Professor Shamlin was at her side “And what do ye want lil’ missy?” “Professor, I request permission to use the restroom Sir.” “Now ye know ya can’t be leavin’ in the midst of a session, but I will make an exception this once. Anyone else need to make use of the ladies room while we’s be at it?” He addressed the class one other girl, Gia raised her hand. He wrote out hall passes for each of them “Ye both needs to be back here by 2:35 sharp, else ye won’t be getting’ back in. Understand?” he asked them They nodded their heads and he rapped his Shillelagh on the floor allowing them to pass through. They could hear him tapping the floor again as the door closed behind them. They all but ran to the restroom to make the dead line, returning with 30 seconds to spare. They knocked on the door and they heard the tapping sound from behind it. Once they were safely inside the class room he sealed the entrance again and they took their seats. “Books down, times up, ye gots one hour ter finish.” He spoke the spell and again lips were sealed tight. Tamari picked up her box of slides, and began her exam scribbling her answers on her blank parchment as she went along. I was shooting for the stereotypical Leprechaun accent here. your thoughts? What about puntuation with the clipped words do I use the ' where he drops the words ending or is there a better way?