Hi, there! For a little context, my male MC has grown with abusive and cruel parents. He watched his siblings die one by one because of the parent's greed(one of them is an addict) and his little sister got sick and died in his arms. He is left to die in a fire by them and later rescued by a mafia leader who takes him in and raises him as a son. Although he receives love, care and even siblings he is still taunted by the past but doesn't wanna show it.(his new siblings have troubled pasts as well and he wants to be a rock for them). He will reveal his past to the female MC in the last chapters and i want to ask how can i make it more dramatic and heart shattering. During the whole book he presents himself as a very tuff, scary man that takes care of the ones he loves the most. I tought about making him cry while he says his siblings died and tense up his body, jaw, etc. Other ideas?