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    Banzai - Weekly Poetry Contest (53) Winner

    Discussion in 'Monthly Poetry Contest Archives' started by ILTBY, Sep 14, 2008.

    Smoke and Mirrors
    By Banzai

    Look into my eyes,
    Through these glass windows
    And past this smoke and mirrors
    Which hide my true self.
    Look into my soul,
    The fiery torment which rages,
    Ever seeking contentment,
    Satiation,
    Vengeanceā€¦

    The sins of the son
    Are visited upon the fathers,
    And the mothers.
    The blood stains your hands;
    Mine are but a proxy.

    Look into my eyes,
    And be afraid;
    For you see yourselves
    But in a mirror,
    Darkly.

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    Huge congratulations Banzai!!
     
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    Congratulations!
    Well done Banzai :)
     
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    Congrats!! Great poem. :)
     
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    congratulations Banzai!!!:)
     
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